I'm hoping this summer to put together a film telling the story of a Jedi character I created, Ammoni Tenson.



Begin with Obi-Wan and Anakin returning from a mission during the Clone Wars (soon before Ep. III). Anakin needs some crystals to make a new lightsaber, he sees Ammoni (Ammoni searches out crystals and assists in Lightsaber construction). The Jedi find there is a new Sith Lord, aside from Dooku and the "mystery" one they're looking for.

Anakin visits Padme, a dark jedi (features obscured by cloak) jumps out and fights Anakin. The Dark Jedi speaks in the ancient Sith language. Pushing Anakin away and locking the door, he takes Padme. Anakin cuts through and emerges to see the Dark Jedi escaping, he finds the Dark Jedi's lightsaber, which Padme pulled from his belt. Going to Ammoni, Anakin finds the origin of the crystals used and sets out to find the captor.

Anakin finds the new Sith, accompanied by the Dark Jedi (features still obscured). The Dark Jedi engages Anakin again and is defeated, the Sith stops the Dark Jedi from killing Anakin. Anakin returns and reports to the council.

The Dark Jedi is seen outside the Jedi archives next, he forces his way in and locks the door using Sith Magic. He kills everyone inside and pulls out a sith holocron, which begins to glow. Beams of light are pulled from the computers into the holocron, Obi-wan and Anakin later realize the entire archives was copied.

Searching through the security recordings, all have been corrupted except one. It is the Dark Jedi, revealed to be Ammoni. He challenges Anakin by saying if he wants to see Padme again, he'll come to a planet (maybe Corellia, details still working out).

Anakin and Obi-Wan head out, Obi-Wan's fighter suddenly disables and crashes. Obi-wan is unconsious, Anakin emerges. The Sith tells Anakin that he is to prove himself. He taught Ammoni all that he knows. After that is said, Ammoni turns on the Sith Master and kills him. Anakin and Ammoni fight again, Ammoni reveals he is a dual-wielder. Anakin is defeated again, his mechanical arm cut off.

Ammoni says that the Sith Lord behind the war is a pretender of the Sith ways and declares that he is the Lord of the Sith. He says he would have killed Anakin long ago, but the Force still had plans for him. He gives Padme back, saying that they both need to live for things to unfold.

"The Sith you seek shall soon reveal himself. Friend shall become enemy. One Order shall fall, and another shall rise." Ammoni leaves them, Obi-Wan comes to and Anakin briefly explains.

Ammoni lands in a forest, a deep voice speaks to him, Ammoni explains his recent actions. The figure remains hidden. The incident is reported to the Council and Yoda fears that coming soon they will not only deal with a Clone War, but a Sith War as well.

Ammoni is shown on top of a temple on Yavin 4, several sentients worship him as the spirit of an ancient Sith Lord manifests itself behind Ammoni. His true Master.


A rather dark ending, I know, but that's how the first part of Ammoni's story goes. Any thoughts? Comments?

This storyline sounds really intriguing. What I really like is how you're able to tie it in with the main Star Wars storyline and not mess up anything.

Not sure what else I can say, other than it's way cool!

There's plenty that goes on in the Clone Wars, they last several years. The Jedi are too distracted being Generals to notice everything, in the comics it was either Yoda or Mace Windu that said the Jedi talk about war strategy rather than the Force when they meet.

Basically, Ammoni has seen what the future holds (rise and fall of the Empire) and wants to wait until everything is at its weakest to restore the ancient Sith Empire. He believes Sideous to be a fool, trying to build his own empire rather than restoring the Sith to its former glory.

My excuse for nobody hearing of this character is because he became such a threat that the Emperor tried to erase everything about Ammoni's existence and sends several attempts to eliminate him. As for the Jedi records, during the Clone Wars he was basically the "repair guy" when they needed replacement parts for their lightsabers.

wow, I like it, it's cool.

I am in the works of my dark lord's story